Hello, friends! Look who’s sticking to their schedule (so far)! Today I thought I’d share another poem that I wrote in my poetry class. Sometimes we had prompts, sometimes we didn’t, but the prompt for this poem was “death.” I had written a sad poem the week before, so I though I would add a twist to the end of this one. Just a note, this was written in February or March of this year. Hope you enjoy!
Falling
C.B. Cook
His best friend was dying.
Heβd seen it happen to others.
Her skin turned a sickly shade,
her skin was too dry
and even though she denied it,
he could tell
she was barely hanging on.
Then it happened.
Falling,
sinking,
she shrunk away,
dropping to rest under their tree.
If he could cry, he would.
He felt himself beginning to fade, too,
and found it harder to hold on.
He longed
to join her
in the earth
below.
But,
as he watched,
a toddler with a bright red cap
picked his best friend off the ground
and proclaimed,
βMy leaf!β
What did you think of that poem? Do you like poetry? Comment down below and let me know what you think!
OH MY GOODNESS. That ending was SO unexpected. It took me off guard in the best way. Bwahaha! XD This was brilliance!
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Yaaay!!! I’m so glad you liked it!! π
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Awww, this is lovely! And also a fun, brilliant twist at the end. β€ π
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Thank you so much! π
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When I first read the poem I didn’t get much but then I read it twice and it struck me likeπ€―π€―π€―
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Yesss, that’s exactly what I was going for! π
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Woah…that was…wowπ€£ At first I’m like “it’s about death, how can that not be sad” and at first it was, but then, the ending. Wowπππ
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I’m so glad you liked it! I love writing poems and stories with plot twists. XD
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