Hullo, everyone! How crazy is it that we’re nearly to part fifteen? I’m so glad for all of your support, and enjoy!!! If you missed Part 13 on Saturday, check it out, and if you’re new, check out Part 1.
“She can stay,” Mom finally says, looking at Dad for confirmation. He nods, pleased.
I’m shocked. Mom never changes her mind like that. And I thought it would be way harder to convince them. What did Blaze do?
“Okay,” Brooklyn agrees, confused. “We’ll take her upstairs and get her set up in our room.” She looks around the living room pointedly, hoping that Blaze gets the message – we want to talk to him. Now.
We head upstairs with Maddie while Mom and Dad go into the kitchen. I drag my sleeping bag out from under my bed for Maddie, but that’s not what we’re really doing up here. Brooklyn puts her hands on her hips. “Blaze, we know you’re here. Come out.”
Blaze appears, an annoying grin on his face as he leans against the wall. Maddie goes over and – to my surprise – hugs him. “You were right that they would agree,” she told him.
“Of course,” Blaze says, attempting to look offended that she wouldn’t trust him, but his eyes sparkle a little. “Everything worked out fine.”
“Fine?!” Brooklyn squeaks. “I don’t know what you did, or how you did it, but you messed with their brains! That is not fine!” If she was a cat, she’d be hissing and spitting.
Blaze’s eyebrows lift. “Who, me? I didn’t do anything to your parents.”
My eyes narrow. “Then what did happen? Obviously something happened to change Mom’s mind, and it had to be something in her mind.”
Blaze laughs. “Ohhh, you mean that! That was all Nudge. And he did an amazing job, let me tell you.” He grins impishly.
Silence.
“Nudge?” Brooklyn gives him a skeptical look.
Blaze nods. “Yeah.” He motions towards the closed door, and a boy appears. He looks like he’s only about fourteen or fifteen. He gives us a small smile and an awkward wave.
“Nudge,” I say icily. I’m probably getting that look in my eye that Brooklyn calls my “dangerous” look.
“Yeah.” Blaze is smirking at me. “’Cause he nudges peoples thoughts in different directions. Get it?”
“Yes, I get it,” I say. Brooklyn steps between me and Blaze. Calm down pops into my head, so I sink grumpily onto my bed.
“Please explain what you just did in detail,” Brooklyn says firmly.
Blaze shrugs. “I thought you two would need more help, so I got authorization from Data to bring Nudge in to help out. Which, I might add, was a very good decision. You may have noticed that.”
Data agreed to this? That makes me feel a teensy bit better… but just a teensy bit. “Well, then I guess your work here is done,” I hint, crossing my arms.
Is it my imagination, or does Blaze’s grin fade a little? He tosses a shrug. “Sure, sure, we’ll leave. But be careful, and don’t hesitate to contact us. We don’t want anything happening to… to you guys.” His face turns serious. “Something’s up.” He motions over to Nudge and the two of them disappear. Brooklyn and I double-check to make sure they’re actually gone before we sink onto our respective beds, facing each other. Maddie sits down next to Brooklyn.
“Well, what are we going to do?” Brooklyn asks softly. It’s only been a couple hours, and everything has changed so drastically.
I look over at Maddie. “It’s a mystery. And mysteries need to be solved, one way or another.”
So Albany’s stating the obvious a teensy bit, but they’re finally jumping into action! Woohoo! Can’t wait to see what happens next…
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So Nudge is basically a combination Rioter/Soother from Mistborn? Because that’s what it sounds like.
Also . . . something’s up. WHAT is up?
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That’s a good way to put it. Although instead of Rioting and Soothing emotions, he’s doing that to thoughts. I hadn’t thought of it that way. 😀
We shall see… 😉
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It’s just the first thing I thought of when I read it. 😀 He seems cool.
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He’s pretty neat. Not very developed and a very minor character, but pretty neat. 😉
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Wow the luxury of having two posts in a couple days in wonderful! (Hint hint you should write more often) I’m kidding, you can write however often you want. 🙂 But thanks for putting this story on here it’s amazing!
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XD Well… I have through part 41 written… I just post only once a week. I probably should start posting twice a week. 😉
Thank you so much!!! It means a lot to hear you say that. 😀
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I wanna say, I’m SO shipping Blaze and Albany (I don’t even know the age difference, but the two would be SO cute together)! 😛
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XD They’re pretty close in age, Blaze is 18, the twins are 17. 😉
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Got it! So Albany and Blaze would be PERFECT!! *goes off and thinks of a ship name for Blaze and Albany*
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*grins* Blazany?
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Perfect!! XD
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Ooh, I love Blaze’s too-cool attitude!
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XD Right???
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Yay more Blaze! XD Nudge is very interesting, and I may have to see more of him. Very soon. 😀
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*cough* Well… maybe not… 😛
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*makes sad face, but then doesn’t mind because Blaze* XD
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Ahh, Blaze. Gotta love that fellow. And he’s good with the kids too apparently. =P At least Maddie likes him. The little clash between the twins and Blaze was a cool touch. Always good to keep some tension in there. Now I can’t wait for something to be up. XP Looking forward to the next part!
~Michael Hollingworth
Disce Ferenda Pati – Learn to endure what must be borne
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Yup, he’s a nice, complicated fellow. 😉 I think there’s a really nice friendship between him and Maddie. He’d make a good big brother…
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lol. He probably would. He’d be the coolest big brother ever. XP Hm. I just had a thought. You’re not gonna pull a mean one on everybody and suddenly make Him the bad guy are you? You’d better not. =P
~Michael Hollingworth
Disce Ferenda Pati – Learn to endure what must be borne
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I wish I could be ambiguous about that but I must say NEVER I COULD NEVER DO THAT. It would make an amazing heartbreaking story, but I would never be able to do that with him. I love him too much. 😛
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Okay. *much relived* XP
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Ugh I know how you guys feel… I’m writing a story and I need to kill someone to make the story line make sense but… I can barely bring myself to do it…:(
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RIGHT???? XD I hate that, but it’s just so terrible…
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