Hullo, everyone! ARE YOU EXCITED??? Because I’m MORE than excited!!!!! 😀 You guys have been so awesome and supportive of Twinepathy, and I’m thrilled to be able to share the cover with you! And because you guys are sooooo awesome, I’m not even going to stall before I show you the cover. (And also because I’m too excited to stall. :P)
HERE IT IS!!!!
Doesn’t it look WONDERFUL??? *cough* If I do say so myself, that is. 😉 It took me twelve tries before I got a cover that I was actually happy with, and I’d love to hear your thoughts on it! Does this make you even MORE excited for the book? I hope so! 😀 And now, part eight…
Part 8: Lemonade
Brooklyn inhales sharply. Maddie looks at me, unsure of whether she should be happy or scared. I place a gentle hand on her shoulder. “That’s neat,” I tell her. “So you have… um…” I wrack my brain for the word I know is there. “Telekinesis,” I finally say.
“Well, here they—” That same annoying voice breaks off mid-sentence. I whirl around to see Blaze standing just a few feet away, this time without his mask. Next to him is a tall girl, probably in her mid-twenties. Her brown hair is cut short, and her eyes are full of… of something, making you think she might know everything about you. But she looks friendly enough as she runs her gaze over us.
“Albany, Brooklyn,” she says with a slight smile. “It’s a pleasure to officially meet you.”
I probably look like a frozen rabbit because I’m so freaked out. How does she know our names? I don’t recognize her. She doesn’t even look vaguely familiar. Her eyes come to rest on the kitchen. “Do you have any coffee or tea? Explaining might take a while.”
“Lemonade,” Brooklyn squeaks.
She’s offering lemonade to a creepy stranger lady who knows our names and just got teleported to our house. “Who are you?” I manage to find my voice, but it sounds much less threatening than I’d hoped.
“I’m Database. You can call me Data,” she says, going into the kitchen.
I exchange glances with Brooklyn. “There’s no way that’s your real name,” I growl.
“You’re right,” she comments, coming back in with a glass of lemonade. “But usually we tend to stick with our codenames at first.”
We? I open my mouth to ask a question, then close it. She focuses on Madison. “Who are you, sweetie?” Her voice is calm and soothing, but Maddie still cowers behind me. Data sighs and reaches towards Maddie.
“Wait, she’s—” I use this as an excuse to grab her arm. I use the physical contact to boost my mental connection to her and then go in to read her mind.
Nothing.
It’s not the same kind of nothing as Maddie’s. It’s not like walking into a mostly empty warehouse. It’s more like walking straight into a brick wall. She’s watching me curiously, then her mouth quirks into a smile. “You’re trying to read my mind, aren’t you? I remember that physical contact helped you…”
I shove her away, making her stumble back a few steps. She’s older than me, taller, and probably stronger, too, but I’ve done a little bit of martial arts and strength training. “I don’t know who you are, but you’d better explain yourself or leave before Denver gets down here. He won’t be happy to see you here.”
Blaze grins impishly. “Oh, I can make sure he won’t see us, if he does come down.”
Data gives him a glare, then turns to us. “Listen,” she starts gently. “We have a lot to discuss. Why don’t we head to the coffee shop down the road, Lava Java? We can talk there, and we won’t have to be worried about being interrupted.”
I exchange glances with Brooklyn. I can tell she doesn’t want to go, and she keeps glancing nervously up the stairs towards Denver’s room. In spite of not wanting them here, my curiosity has definitely been piqued. And when my curiosity’s involved… well, there’s no way anyone can sway me any differently.
“How will we handle Denver and our parents?” I ask.
Data nods, pleased. “You can either go tell him you’re leaving or you can leave a note. We won’t be gone too long, so you shouldn’t have to worry about your parents, depending on when they’re going to come back here.”
Brooklyn makes a sound that tells me she’s not pleased at all, but I ignore her. “We can leave a note.”
Brooklyn makes the sound again. “No, I’ll go tell him,” she growls, giving me a look. She hurries upstairs, and in a minute she comes back down, grumbling under her breath.
“All clear?” I ask.
She nods. “He’s so distracted I don’t think he even heard me. I told him we were going shopping. He was putting on a flannel shirt. Flannel. I can’t even believe…”
I roll my eyes and nod at Data. I grab Maddie’s hand, which she squeezes tightly, and we follow Blaze and Data out the door, Brooklyn trailing, as we leave possible safety behind.
SO THE COVER!!!!!!! What do you think? And the part? Database seems like an interesting character… should the twins trust her and Blaze? Guess we’ll find out!
Ooh. Does Data=Jen?
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*wiggles eyebrows*
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I LOVE the cover! And this part? AWESOME! I’m definitely liking Data and Blaze. 🙂
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😀 😀 😀 SO MUCH HAPPINESS!!!
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The cover is beautiful
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Thank you! 😀 Took me thirteen tries, but I finally got it. 😛
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I already told you this, but the cover looks great! And as usual, the story is getting better and better!!!!
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Thank you!!! 😀 You made me super happy just now. Thanks for all your help, I really appreciate it!
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No prob! Glad to be of service! 🙂
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This is awesome! I love the cover 🙂 I need to read this, but not until after NaNo haha. I wish you luck with your writing 🙂
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Thank you!!! 🙂 I hope you’ll have a great NaNo, too! 😉
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Amazing cover! And there’s so much suspense in that. o.O Must read more.
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Thank you!!! 😀 I’m glad you like it! I’m so excited – I think NaNo’s going to help me finish this up! 🙂
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I can’t wait to see what you come up with! =DD
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Me too!!! 😀
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I hope NaNo goes well for you too! Keep calm and write on. 😉
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Amen to that! 😀
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Awesome! 😀 Glad Blaze is back. He’s fun. I should head up a fan club. Or does he already have one? 😛
Did you change the background on the cover? I think it was white before, and now it’s cream.
*checks* wait… no it wasn’t. Anyway. I like it. 😉
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XD Everyone seems to like him, too! A fan club would be AWESOME!!! I have a group for Twinepathy on Goodreads, and he’s got a character spot on there, but he has no fan club. You should totally do that!! 😀
It’s not much of a difference, so you probably didn’t notice before. You really can’t notice when it’s on a black or dark background. 😛 Thanks! 😀
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I’m not on goodreads, so I’ll have to find another way to make one… Hmm…
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Not sure! The only other thing I could think of was a blog… but that might be a little much. 😛 I could make a website on wix.com… or you could. It’s pretty easy. XD
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I’ll figure out something. 😉
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Wow, beautiful cover!!! It looks awesome! 🙂
And another awesome part! I really like Blaze. . .don’t know why. . . 😉
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Thank you so much! 😀
He’s pretty neat. Definitely my favorite guy character. 😉
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I love the cover! =D It’s really cool. =) And I’m soooooo intrigued by where the story’s headed. I love how she’s called Data by the way. That’s just wayyyyyy neat. XP Also, there seems to be a whole lotta issues with their powers. She’s already been unable to read the minds of two people. =P At least, I think it’s two. I can’t remember if she’s tried to read Blaze’s mind or not. Looking forward to the next post! 🙂
~Michael Hollingworth
Disce Ferenda Pati – Learn to endure what must be borne
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Thank you!!!! 😀 I’m having a lot of fun. In fact, I think this is the most fun I’ve ever had writing a story before. I’m pretty sure it’s my dream story. 😀
Yup, just a few complication… 😛 Nope, she hasn’t tried to read Blaze’s mind yet, not even where I’m at in writing it! Must include that eventually, that would be intriguing.
Next post! *facepalm* Yes, yes, must post that now…
Thanks so much for your support! 😀
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You’re welcome! =D That’s so great that you’re enjoying writing this story. 🙂 I’m glad for you.
Ah. XP Ok. Glad I didn’t miss anything. =P
You’re welcome! I love the story. 🙂
~Michael Hollingworth
Disce Ferenda Pati – Learn to endure what must be borne
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I’m so grateful for your support. Thanks for the wonderful comments! 😀
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You’re welcome. =)
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Oh man, I just love Data’s name! Whoever came up with it must be so creative and probably owns a character in this series who has a guys name but isn’t a guy and she’s super sweet.
*cough* *wink* *cough*
As I’ve told you before, loving this series so much!
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*cough* You nugget, complimenting yourself. 😛 Don’t worry, you’ll be in the acknowledgements, beta-reader guinea pig and motivation platypus.
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Such a cool cover! Awesome job! 🙂
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Thank you!!! 😀
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COVER! 😀 😀 😀 LOVE IT! Yay more Blaze! 🙂 Database seems interesting…???
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😀 Thank you!!! YES YAY! He deserves as much “screen time” as possible. 😛 She’s pretty neat… 😉
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This cover is fabulous! Looks professionally done!
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*blushes* Thank you so much! ❤
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THE COVER IS AMAZING!!! Where did you find it?? Did you design it yourself?
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Yes, I actually did design it myself. 🙂 It’s one of the reasons I decided to major in graphic design.
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That’s so awesome. 🙂 Looks so professional!!
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Thank you! 🙂
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