Hi, everyone! I thought you would enjoy reading this poem I wrote for a poetry contest (as in, almost a year ago). I didn’t win, unfortunately, but I did make it to the finals! Enjoy!
Pessimist And Optimist
The sun so hot,
I sweat,
I melt,
The days are long and humid.
The yard a mess,
I rake,
I sweep,
The leaves keep falling down.
The wind so cold,
I shiver,
I freeze,
My fingers nearly numb.
The birds so loud,
I weed,
I mow,
There’s so much work to do.
The sun so warm,
I bask,
I jog,
The sunshine soothes my soul.
The air so crisp,
I twirl,
I leap,
The leaves shed colors on the lawn.
The snow so bright,
I shape,
I throw,
The laughter fills the air.
The grass so green,
I plant,
I listen,
Nature’s music sings to me.
Sour or sweet,
Pushy or helpful,
Harsh or loving,
The pessimist’s view or the optomist’s.
What think you?
That’s awesome! I love it!! 🙂
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Thanks! 😀
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Love this poem! 😀 Great job! Unabashed optimist here. 😉
Funny, the two views almost sound like Jean and Cobalt. XP though, Jean would keep her opinions to herself, while Cobalt spreads his around.
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XD Thank you!
It’s really cool to compare it to characters. 😉
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Well, I don’t think Jean is totally that pessimistic. But mostly she tries to damper Cobalt’s ridiculous optimism down to earth. 😉 “A realist” as she would say.
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Oh yes, definitely. Sometimes it’s good to be in between.
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDD Thank you!! ❤
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This is awesome! Love it!!!! And the end is cool, too, what think you? 🙂
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Thanks so much! 😀
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I don’t just think I like it. I know I do.
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😀 Awww! Thank you so much! ❤
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Great job! I really enjoyed reading the poem, and how it goes through the seasons too! You should have won something!! Keep writing nice poems like that!
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Awww, thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Such a great poem!
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Thank you! 😀
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I love it! You totally should’ve won! 🙂
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Awww, thank you! There were a lot of other neat poems. I’m just glad I made it to the finals. 😉
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Shakespeare! C’mere a minute! I think I found your runaway sonnet…
*comes back after four minutes* He said he’s not missing one and is very impressed with yours. 😉
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Awww!!!! Shakespeare???? Well… I’m not sure about that… XD *happy hug for making my day*
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*hugs you more* 😀
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Love it! You have a gift for poetry, me thinks. 🙂
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Awww, thank you!!! I know one thing for sure: I have more fun writing poetry than analyzing it. XD
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Haha, agreed! I’m not much of an analyzer with poems either. 😛
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